VERY in character. Your Lorne is PERFECT. Very sweet also. Love the explanation of Willow and Kennedy's separation. The forwardness of Willow at the end ("First, I'd kiss you long and hard...") strikes me as out of character; i just don't expect Willow to be so verbally explicit (though the first "If this were a date [insert kiss]" did work for me), but that's my only complaint, and i definitely know from experience how difficult it can be to move your characters into bed believeably.