Colds and shoddy writing

My throat is getting itchy, like there's a cold starting up. Bah...

And after reading about 2/5 of the way through the novel, I've come to the conclusion that it has larger flaws than I feel like fixing. I'll just give it a sort of decent fixup and post it on the web, then start on a better one under less time-critical circumstances. No matter how Orphea's Song turns out in the end, writing it was very educational and definitely worth the effort.